Let's look at your paragraph carefully and correct the grammar step by step:

Original: The city feels different in every place. The city centre is full of busy cars and buses. The charming Old Town attracts tourists. Children play and mothers walk with strollers in quiet residential areas, while the amusement park is live with happy screams and giggles.

Corrections:

• Sentence 1: "The city feels different in every place." – This is okay but sounds a little odd. It would be clearer to say: "The city feels different in every part." or "Every part of the city feels different."
• Sentence 2: "The city centre is full of busy cars and buses." – This is correct.
• Sentence 3: "The charming Old Town attracts tourists." – Correct as well.
• Sentence 4: "Children play and mothers walk with strollers in quiet residential areas," – This is good; clear and grammatically correct.
• Sentence 5: "while the amusement park is live with happy screams and giggles." – Here, "is live" is not correct. It should be "is alive" because "alive" means full of life, while "live" often relates to something happening right now (like a live show).

Corrected paragraph:

Every part of the city feels different. The city centre is full of busy cars and buses. The charming Old Town attracts tourists. Children play and mothers walk with strollers in quiet residential areas, while the amusement park is alive with happy screams and giggles.

See how small changes make your writing clearer and more natural!